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My dream too sweet
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My dream too sweet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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When in clench of Soma's bless as I dream the perfect dream I rub my lips across your chest sweet kisses mute desire's scream and such a scent unknown to me instilling hunger just to breathe to taste the salt upon your neck abandonment in recklessness low moan keening soft sighs singing symphony--become brass band. Waking weeping, cursing sleeping-- the burn of yearn to feel your hand. |
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gremlin Junior Member
since 2001-04-18
Posts 25NY, USA |
this dream is too sweet, too sweet to be true. Good one, Stan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! seren this is great, enjoy the read  ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'such a scent unknown to me instilling hunger just to breathe' Draw a deep breath ... breathe it in. This is emotive penning at it's finest, my friend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I rub my lips across your chest sweet kisses mute desire's scream and such a scent unknown to me instilling hunger just to breathe to taste the salt upon your neck abandonment in recklessness low moan keening soft sighs singing symphony--become brass band. Waking weeping, cursing sleeping-- the burn of yearn to feel your hand. ======================= yer so cool ... yer a beautiful moth, ya know!!  and yer ache in rhyme does define ... and it tis sublime and divine (sweet as raspberry tea ... nicey spicey like Red Hot riplets) (their aphrodesiacs ya know)lol but thats a whole nother kind of vials baby ROFL   meI love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cool Serenity, what a sweet dream! Enjoyed. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Love it Serenity!! Just love it.... SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all---and a little message to the one who KNOWS--I had to leave out the part about the crawfish!  But thanks, lovie, for a wonderful night's sleep...  With gratitude and hugs to forum! |
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