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Open Poetry #13

Rose

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

0 posted 2001-04-26 01:45 PM

ROSE

In an emerald meadow
There is a scarlet rose
Growing and spreading its aroma
Without a purpose

Why is everything laughing?

Is it because the sun is shining?
Or is it because our love is growing?

The mountain flower
Is strong and alone
In a chilly wind
Dreaming of a scarlet rose
Faraway

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-26 02:30 PM

Well done! Good imagery.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-26 03:22 PM

Why thank you for writing this for me. What? You didn't?

That's alright!
I sure enjoyed it!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2001-04-26 07:00 PM

'The mountain flower
Is strong and alone
In a chilly wind
Dreaming of a scarlet rose
Faraway'

Yes, wonderful imagery! I truly enjoyed this one! Great work...

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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