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Open Poetry #13

materialism(senryu)

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2001-04-30 02:39 AM

in pursuit of wealth
scarce morals sink, bitten whole
Ambulance speeds past

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-04-30 07:02 AM

Down to business
There's a dollar to be made
They'll play tomorrow

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2001-04-30 12:20 PM

thank you nan for your poetic response!

you know, i mistook "play" for "pay" initially...i wonder if that was intentional?

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-30 01:04 PM

well done. . . this says it all. . .

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Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-05-01 11:33 AM

Very nice!

Nathan

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-05-01 12:03 PM

thanks...i was waiting for the bus when this ambulance sped past. hence this senryu

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-06-06 08:30 AM

very good one

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