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Open Poetry #13

Danced Oceans Song

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-05-01 10:08 AM

Danced Oceans Song

Affinity with the ocean
White surf , salty spray
Stroll along the beach
Reach a secluded bay

Tiny warm rock pools
Reach in with my hand
Whispered waves float
The sea licks the sand

Trickling through toes
Soft waves rolling in
Reaching forth I meet
Ripples caressing skin

Rhythmic waves dance
White capped blue sea
Soothing lapping flows
Lick my body playfully

Beckoned to the edge
Tasting oceans tongue
Embraced ripples flow
I danced oceans song
Hope

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-01 12:58 PM

I think of hope also when I think of the ocean, and I love your descriptive phrasing

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-01 01:10 PM

Hilton Head here I come....

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-05-01 01:15 PM

i think is good oceanography. You scooled me well

Coal Surrender
Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

4 posted 2001-05-03 07:46 AM

The salty spray, and sounds of waves...captivating, heart and soul. Lovely work, Hope.

Coal

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