Open Poetry #13 |
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Upon The Dawn |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind ![]() |
Lost in you I stand screaming Your voice in my head Softly calling, In you lost I lay weeping I feel silence Deep inside me My soul echoes My heart feels pain Where traces of you remain, The rain falling, my tears In shades of midnight I write to you by candlelight as you Lay sleeping, I can no longer hear Your sweet slumber, but I know you are there I feel your warmth, your breathing still Guides me to the haven of my Dreams among the stars I love you for the passion I feel when I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your Beauty, for the colors I use to Paint our canvas of time gathered In vibrant colors Walking in summertime, Gently falling snows of winter Autumn leaves blowing Time is all I have Upon the dawn, your calming Peace renews my heart, Where again we dance in salvation Time *** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Lauren.....I have not words to express the beauty of this to me on this day....thank you dear lady. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
One could not help but to close her eyes and see the colors you painted. So vivid - I loved it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lost in you I lay crying I feel the silence Deep inside me My soul echoes My heart feels the pain Where traces of you remain, The rain falling, my tears In shades of midnight I write to you by candlelight as you Lay sleeping, I can no longer hear Your sweet slumber, but I know you are there I feel your warmth, your breathing still Guides me to the haven of my Dreams among the stars I love you for the passion I feel when I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your Beauty, for the colors I use to Paint our canvas of time gathered In vibrant colors Walking in summertime, Gently falling snows of winter Autumn leaves blowing Time is all I have Upon the dawn, your calming Peace renews my heart, Where again we dance in salvation Time stands still =========================== oh L, you already know I felt every exquisite word of this, and I know where this level of inspire comes from ... and the need to feel and then write it... God this is beautiful, I just wish we didnt have to live it to write it so intensly... and the rest...you already know *S* love ya for this one sweet poetess of the stars and now I will give these words back.. as you know how much they mean to me... but they belong here with this poem ![]() ![]() Though my soul may sit in darkness, It will arise in perfect light. I have loved the stars too fondly To be fearful of the night". (author unknown) ![]() ~~~~~~~ ![]() "Nature's first green is gold, Her hardest hue to hold." ... "So dawn goes down to day, Nothing gold can stay." ~Frost~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-10-2001).] |
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samantha4 Junior Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
lovely...thank you for sharing it i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was simply beautiful - oh, and Janet Marie, your comment was awesome too - lol! |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
then may the dawn come and with it, the promise of forever. . . beautiful Lauren. . . just beautiful. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, You describe love so beautifully, my friend. I enjoyed this much. ![]() Michael Proust- |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you to all that responded...I am grateful and appreciate you all very much... ![]() Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Needed to read this one tonite.... miss you sweet emerald poetess ![]() Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Siofra![]()
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Wherever you are, this is beautiful! ![]() ![]() I am many. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love you for the passion I feel when I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your Beauty, for the colors I use to Paint our canvas of time gathered In vibrant colors Walking in summertime, Gently falling snows of winter Autumn leaves blowing Time is all I have ============================ praying for time...because theres so many who love you and need you...so many beautiful words still to write. love you my sister of butterfly memories. jm ![]() |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
a real gem this poem is PoetFriendGreeneyes... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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