Open Poetry #13 |
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Given in Love/Given in Thanks |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
*Gallery Special Exhibit* For Mother's Day: For my Mother, Corina Happy Mother's Day to all Mothers out there today Mom, is a day set aside for you it's a day when you usually get flowers and candy and jewelry but today Mom, I have a gift to give that's just the right size, color, and shape and best of all, you won't have to return it here it is you'll forgive me a little if the container is a bit torn and if the edges are a bit beat I've been holding on to it for a while it's actually a gift you gave to me thirty-three years ago it's my life and I know that it probably doesn't look like you thought that it would when you gave it to me I've tried to take care of it the best that I could and yes, I made mistakes but you forgave me for them and I learned from them thanks to you so here Mom, today, I return the gift of my life back to you a gift that you gave me in love and a gift I now give to you in thanks -------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Well you took the words right out of my mouth. I couldn't have said it better on this day. In my journal library this will stay. LP For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Blinking back tears. This is beautiful. Completely. My compliments, Sven. "I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have done a good thing Sven...James |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ A lovely poem, with words of Grace for mothers....for your mom....wonderful mu friend... ![]() Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful, I hope my kids write a poem like this one day. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well, no words need to be added, it's marvellous. Titia |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And what finer gift can a Mother receive? Beautiful Sven, this Mum would be honoured to receive such a beautiful poem and/or gift... Isis *Enlightenment is within all things* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sven.....this poem is tender & sweet as always.........helen |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Beautiful piece of work Sven. ![]() This is something for her to be proud of... says something about her too, like the kind of son she's raised and the great job she has done! ~Sheri |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, this is truly BEAUTIFUL! ![]() Sauni Sauni :) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
There's always so much heart in your writings, Sven, I'm sure your mother is a very proud woman! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a wonderful gift Sven. Well done. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yes...words from the heart is the best gift a person can give to another and this poem showed that beauty even more i hope you and your mother had a wonderful mothers day together...thanks for the read...sven [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-14-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are a pretty special guy |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Your mother sounds wonderful, and no less her son. Lucky pair. Joyce |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you everyone. . . your words mean a lot to me. . . I'm glad that you liked this one. . . I haven't shared it with my Mother yet, but I will very soon. . . Thank you again. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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