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Parker
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since 2000-01-06

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0 posted 2001-05-15 10:41 AM

Torches

Flower scent perfume
Embers of the burning want
Flickering Red Lips

***

Tighly hugging dress
Tranced by music moving rites
Dance in torches light

***

Melt of Flesh with Kiss
Desire fueling felt heat
Love this torch of life

James Parker Haley May 15, 2001

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 05-15-2001).]

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-05-15 10:47 AM

Yes...that would be a torch through a man's eyes alright! Well done!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

Homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/451673]

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-05-15 11:28 AM

Very very good.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-05-15 11:30 AM

hip by hip she moves
time slows as she finds her groove
extinguishing flames

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

4 posted 2001-05-15 12:08 PM

Your always so good at Senryu's. These are no exception. Very beautiful.

But I got to tell ya...I read the title and got scared. I thought maybe you were going on a witch hunt!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-05-15 12:11 PM

burn with me my love
as we dance the night away
let me be your torch

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2001-05-15 01:01 PM

lovely touches....enjoyed yo ur words...

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-05-15 02:57 PM

like a moth to flame
singe my skin, whisper my name
slow burn of insane

YOU cant title something TORCHES
and NOT expect the moths to fly by

BUT you knew that, right

by the way...like me new signature? LOL

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-05-15 03:10 PM

me off!!!!! whew!!

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

9 posted 2001-05-15 10:11 PM

The core is warm
Sun's fire expel
nothing held back
each singing to one music.

From the heart - sincerity. Where you go I follow.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

10 posted 2001-05-16 08:06 PM

*^*

weave slow into me
as wax atop hot embers
melt upon my lips

*^*

very nice pictures you paint here..

, g

so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind...
-tim mcgraw

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

11 posted 2001-05-17 12:15 PM

Thank you all for your replies....

Sorry I'm not thanking each of you, just need to say thanks and i'll catch you all on the next write.

parker

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