Open Poetry #13 |
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rushing wind |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida ![]() |
do you hear it? the sound of rushing wind tickling leaves of trees as it makes its way to your doorstep. a whisper on the wing of a dove as she lights upon your window sill... water trickling over polished rocks-- singing, singing, a sound of harps and angel voices, as it gently kisses your toes. do you see it? the prism peeking through a lasting dew drop shining into your hand-- hold it, feel it, let it tattoo itself into your palm. do you feel me? for all these things i wished for you today-- my gift to you, designed by the master craftsman. -dgvarner 5-15-01 "...if i ran away, i'd never have the strength to go very far..." [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-16-2001).] |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
DVG, Very nice gift. Thanks. It brings a bit of calm to a hectic day. I enjoyed this piece. Panne |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I sure felt them after reading this, thank you! Kathleen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes, yes and YES...a lovely gift indeed...and I am smiling at a bad joke parker once made about my reference to a "hot rushing wind" ROFL...but you KNOW how he is...gotta love him! But I'm sure safe...this is too beautiful for such silliness. Lovely expression! ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PANNE..youre welcome.. ![]() KATHLEEN..glad you enjoyed ![]() SERENITY..i can only imagine what kind of joke PARKER made....LOL! we'll see how he butchers this one.. ![]() thank you for beautiful ![]() hugs, g |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
yes, i can hear it, but not nearly often enough.... loved this.. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I'll try to be nice and not butcher anything... cause this was so sweet and I think I could feel that wind. Send me that wind anytime... no not serenity's hot rushing wind. ![]() .... hmm you know how a poet tends to read into a poem for hidden meanings.... I think I'm getting the message now... your sending me a fan to cool my feet from Sears made by master craft... cool. ![]() Parker was here.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful piece, dgvarner! A rainbow in the hand...wow what a fantastic idea! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ So beautifully said. Replete with imagery of such serenity. Florida wears well on you ! ![]() Have a GREAT day ... You've placed images of beauty in my thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks JAMIE ![]() PARKER...lol...yeah..i knew it was bound to emerge..that little devil in ya...lol but anyway...glad you stopped by all the same.. ![]() VAS..thanks poet friend ![]() MISS MARGIE..yes..florida has always worn well on me.. ![]() hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- well, look at you penning happy thoughts..lol. i'm liking this alot...very nice.. ![]() sending these little wishes back at ya.. ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sending those warm thoughts to you too, my friend...may your days be filled with such serenity... ![]() |
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