Open Poetry #13 |
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On A Balmy Moonlit Night |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
On a tropical night in Hawaii Is were you will find me I'll meet you underneath The swaying palm trees We'll watch the setting sun Like pure gold it will melt As the softness of your mouth Upon my lips will be felt In a hammock under the moonlight Is where we will lie As we search for constellations Up above in the starlit sky Here we'll lie for a while As we sway to and fro And we'll bask in the glory Of our loves sweet afterglow |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'In a hammock under the moonlight Is where we will lie As we search for constellations Up above in the starlit sky' Oooh, wow...this is just the picture of a perfect night! I've GOT to try this sometime...wonderful poem! I love it! sp ![]() to be with you... |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Sue, I find your poetry so very rewarding. You have a natural talent for taking your reader with you. Great job. Roger TPP |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
snowpants Thank you so much for reading this, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.......Sue Roger Once again thank you for your lovely words and I'm glad you enjoyed the journey....Sue Suetang |
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