Open Poetry #13 |
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Left in dust of a parade in passing... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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There is nothing- nothing left even thought of you inept a feast of bankrupt for the king I tried to think of everything all my labors for your sup the finest wine to fill your cup the grandest silks I did adorn a curtsey--practiced in the morn before the pond while at its still while sun was rising in full shill... I hear the horses, sweet drum beat, bass, in pound, passing--fleet... and in dismay upon my feet are the tears of you, un-meet. So the parade, it passed me by... the tears in sting-- a cheek's mapped sighs, always I will wonder why I did not catch the sweet king's eye... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity, I know I've told you this many times, but, I love the way you write....you are so awesome! ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How I do relate, sweet lady... and how well you do write!!! This is great! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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I tried to think of everything all my labors for your sup the finest wine to fill your cup the grandest silks I did adorn a curtsey--practiced in the morn before the pond while at its still while sun was rising in full shill... ====================== and in dismay upon my feet are the tears of you, un-meet. So the parade, it passed me by... the tears in sting-- a cheek's mapped sighs, always I will wonder why I did not catch the sweet king's eye... =============================== me thinks the king needs glasses ![]() me thinks you are working these metaphors to poetic perfection ... me thinks they way you rhyme in tears and sighs is poety in motion... me thinks me is a fan ![]() |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Maybe you haven't caught the king's eye yet, but you will on one of the parades....... by the way pour me a shot tooooo... I'm ready Great write.. Bernie a ![]() ![]() Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank you all much, but you DO see what I mean? Kinda dusty here.... Again, I do thank you all. Just a bad day. My mood ring is black. My horoscope said, "go back to bed" and I don't even have a bed. My biorhythms? Forget 'em! Off the chart. ![]() Somebody? Quick, kiss me! Make me smile! ![]() oooh...that almost worked.... *pouting, me* [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 03-31-2001).] |
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