Open Poetry #13 |
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- The Cry Of My Heart - |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA ![]() |
Cry Of My Heart ![]() ![]() The pain of alone shivered slowly from the remembrance of my heart oozing like cancerous sores, mama's healing embrace depart howl of bond no more from unseen betrayal bestowed if I must crawl away from you I'd do so... yes, I love you this much... recognition of hurt...anulled medusa of fate's stare blind-folds my will 'morrows promises dulled weakens the roar of my cries behind your ignore a stone-bitter pill swallowing sorrow of intense, awakening to the shrill of silence hope interlaces not as toes unfold from the haven of bedsheets - my linen crutch, tears defy sun's rays the ground is much colder dead upon touch this path of astray heart weeps in shadowed grey ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-03-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh Melissa, how this one oozes with hurt. Such sadness in these lines. You have been severly wronged my friend, I hope she sees the error of her ways and makes it right. life it way to short for scenes such as this one. ![]() All writing comes |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Oh no. too much sadness. I like this but ugghhh It feels painful |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, you've gone and made me cry now. a superior write by you, but, so very sad. hang in there, and I'm here for you ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah my Melybee.... quote: sometimes that is what it takes.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
((((((((hugs)))))))))))) |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
know that you are never alone. . . powerful words. . . from a tender heart. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Lone Wolf, JamesBowie, Chels, Karilea, Kathleen and Sven thank you for your encouragement and for reading this very personal piece~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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