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There is a Difference
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There is a Difference |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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There is a difference It’s funny how you jump for joy Every time you buy a new toy Your mind lifts into stimulate. Your body shifts to percolate. You just can’t wait to get it home Within your room and all alone And where in miserly fashion Tingle in a swell of passion. So alive for just a moment Full of spicy live enrollment Just bristling in the thrill of fine Knowing that it’s mine, all mine. A release of satisfaction By a single selfish action You bought a little fantasy A teaspoon full of ecstasy For some it’s just a fire fly For some it will forever lie. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Extraordinary work, my friend, Seymour... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Did you get a new golf club ????  Delightful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. Marge, How did you guess? LOL *L* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, this is an entertaining look at human nature ~ you do these very well.  Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
New anythings create such a sparkle....the joy in having them, though, is to make use of them each day, just as if it were the very first day we came to find it in the first place.... so no wrapping that iron around a tree, Sy! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
ah such delight, your so so right. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Claire, We have all had those feelings. *L* Sunshine, I promise. *L* Rosebud, Thank you, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So alive for just a moment Full of spicy live enrollment Just bristling in the thrill of fine Knowing that it’s mine, all mine. A release of satisfaction By a single selfish action You bought a little fantasy A teaspoon full of ecstasy For some it’s just a fire fly For some it will forever lie. ============================== So you saw me the other day when I got back from the music store...  well, I only bought 5 new cds LOL way cool Sy-babes.... yes....this is exactly like how it feels very cute and clever poem...just like the poet *winkiewinkie*  |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Seymour, So you saw me get the last edition of Harry Potter, heh? No one reads it until I do...lol. Panne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, So that's where you were. Only 5 new cds? Winkiewinkie. Panne, You see everybody does it. LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A teaspoon full of ecstasy... I love that line, Seymour!!! Now if only I could afford to buy a lifetime's worth! *G* Great poem... and enjoy your new club. *G* (Just don't forget to take a notebook along to jot down poetic thoughts. LOL) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well you had me going thinking about "toys" until someone mentioned golf clubs.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very true and very well written The last two lines were excellent Liz |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I agree with Liz, those last two lines were superb. Kathleen Blake |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
ah, very clever indeed! wonderful play with words in this one, enjoyed very much! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Just take it one day at a time. *L* Vandana, Thank you. Naked, It could be anything. *L* Elizabeth, You are my dream poetess and your comment is like a dream. Love Sy Irish, You are both wonderful. Tradewind, So glad you enjoyed. |
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