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Touch (Senryu) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Bodies conquer space Souls conquer time and bodies We meet in one touch |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
souls transcend bodies meet in misty mystery blending through the touch |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I shall not try to carry on this vein...only commend you for beginning it with such a powerfully intriguing piece, PM! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
1derful, just 1derful! Let thy moon arise. William Blake [This message has been edited by lunatic (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
time and space conquered a single touch has prevailed and time is on hold Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and right you are....love your thoughts. (hugs) Charisma |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
touch heals a blank soul forever changed in time all done with one touch "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such a beautiful love haiku from your beautiful heart! (sigh) Made me wish I was melting with my love right about now! (sigh) Beautifully said, sweet Poeminister! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
time is lost to touch when bodies come together erasing the space  ~SEA |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely write, Poe...and look at what you have inspired!! will think of something to continue the thread... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I love this short form, but am too gabby to pull it off. lol these were all beautifully done to follow a lovely beginning. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Yet space is a body souls have time to touch the inner space we look to conquer..... Wonderful!! now I think all day. |
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