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theLadypoet
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since 2001-05-28
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0 posted 2001-06-11 05:51 PM


A gauzy impertinence
of moonlit moths,
twined in starlight,
tangled by the wind,
sent skittering skyward.

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt
© Copyright 2001 Sherry Asbury - All Rights Reserved
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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1 posted 2001-06-11 06:51 PM

I am not sure "impertinence" works...but enjoyed altogether the image this poem creates to mind.
Nicely done.

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-11-2001).]
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