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Open Poetry #14

Sweetness (senryu)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-12 01:40 AM

Sweetness (senryu)

you’re something special
love pouring like warm honey
a treat for the heart

spreading tenderness
sweet stickiness your touches
soothing hearts dessert

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-06-12 01:43 AM

Dear Lady, you are something special, as your words flow like that warm honey...gentle smile

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-06-12 05:18 AM

" love pouring like warm honey
a treat for the heart"

Very nice lines...thanks!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-12 08:55 AM

I love the senryu form and yours is sooooooooo sweet

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-06-12 02:20 PM

Slick gets sticky...let the honey flow!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-12 02:22 PM

Very sweet indeed!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-12 02:23 PM

"sweet stickiness"--Love it

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