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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-06-13 08:06 PM

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-13-2001).]

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-06-13 08:27 PM

very teasingly, but heck on a fellow with bificals. grin..enjoyed though..gentle smile

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-13 08:47 PM

I enjoyed, too and I have trifocals!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2001-06-13 09:27 PM

love those touches...

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-06-13 09:30 PM

this one is sooo kool

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-06-14 01:17 AM

very creative...i enjoyed this a lot sven...

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-06-14 01:26 AM

this is sooooo cool...love it...helen

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-06-14 06:28 AM

Wonderfully creative Sven! Nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-06-14 06:38 AM

Hey Sven you smoothie you're at it again!....Interesting layout.......flowed right down the page!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-06-14 06:44 AM

love these gentle fingertips.

Charisma

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2001-06-14 08:00 AM

(smiling) Very creative form.and use of a few words to convey quite a lot....

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2001-06-15 12:38 PM

Touched by Sven in so many ways.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-06-15 01:21 PM

thanks to everyone that's replied. . .

I like to experiment with different forms and ways of laying the poem out on the page. . . glad that you all took the time to read this one. . .

thank you!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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