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Open Poetry #14

Waiting for You

Sharon
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 53
Within a whisper

0 posted 2001-06-16 09:37 PM

with silken sighs
     I hold my hand
against the screen of blue

my love, I wait
     with tenderness
for just one glimpse of you

I've never seen your mouth
        speak the words
I long to hear

I've never heard your voice
           as you whisper
"hello, my dear"

But I have read the words
you penned from
         poet's dream

'Tis why I sit here
and wait for your name
    upon this screen

SilentSongs
Junior Member

since 2001-05-31

Posts 43
Mist of Time

1 posted 2001-06-16 10:23 PM

Very tender
filled with an admitted
openly honest longing
acheing made plain
I hope your blue screen fulfills

A very gentle and sweet write.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-06-16 10:47 PM

I've done this exact thing...sometimes a name on the screen is almost enough. Nice write!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-16 10:48 PM

Filled with sweet longing. Very tender write.

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-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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