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Open Poetry #14

Drink My Ration (senryu)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-19 01:48 AM

Drink My Ration (senryu)

rain soft on my skin
tickles as it caresses
I let it’s touch in

upon me descend
fiery wet sweetened caress
in the touch you send

drenched deep through passion
your love wonderfully flows
I drink my ration

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-06-19 02:06 AM

Nice and sensuous...lovely write.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-19 08:44 AM

very nice.. sensual and soft..an acceptance

as always I enjoyed!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-06-19 09:31 AM

BEAUTIFUL!!!

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-06-19 09:38 AM

Oh good! Another Senryu fiend! Welcome to the club!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-06-19 11:51 AM

Well done! Well written! A fine senryu string! HA!

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

6 posted 2001-06-19 12:40 PM

Very nice grouping

~A~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-06-19 06:32 PM

ahhhhhhh. . . refreshing helen. . .

well done. . .

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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2001-06-19 06:35 PM

Oh I love this a lot.

Titia

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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-06-19 09:37 PM

Great senryu, Helen.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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