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Open Poetry #14

Fences

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-06-19 06:17 PM

Fences
Rusted Barbed wire
memories
strung between rotted
post of pain,
Signed…
No Trespassing

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-19 06:19 PM

Hmmm, hurtful thoughts. Ugly visualization.
Beautiful poetry.

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2001-06-19 06:25 PM

I like this very much, well done.

Regards,
Olias.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-06-19 09:13 PM

barbed wire and hedge trees
work past thorns to fence us in
blood runs in cool morn

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-19 09:19 PM

This one stings, Cpat. Ouch!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2001-06-20 06:52 AM

This just rips the heart

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 06-20-2001).]

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

6 posted 2001-06-20 05:41 PM

...I'm feeling a closed heart full of pain...needing the help of the wandering honeysuckle to lead it to lucious green pastures through its sweet fragrance...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2001-06-20 05:59 PM

I feel the pain here.....

Wonderful poetry

Maree

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

8 posted 2001-06-20 06:26 PM

Fabulous write!

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