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Open Poetry #14

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SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-07-01 01:43 AM

The movement
of clouds -
Drifting shadows
along wind-swept
landscapes.
My eyes gaze into
the fading pockets
of light that flicker
like a candle,
stirred by
the night breeze.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-07-01 03:02 AM

Very good imagery, SK, enjoy the feel and the read...gentle smile

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-07-01 06:34 AM

This is very, very lovely and touching.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-07-01 08:34 AM

Krista, I have to agree with the others...this has lovely imagery...and a soft good-night feel....

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-07-01 10:46 AM

Yes, softly pretty, gives you a nice feel for the image.
Sandra

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2001-07-01 12:21 PM

Logan ~thank you

and thank you for the gentle smile

Titia ~you are too kind Titia

thank you

Sunshine ~why thank you Sunshine

a soft goodnight is a lovely way to look at this poem. I'm honoured

Sandra ~

thank you for the kind words

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

6 posted 2001-07-01 02:43 PM

Krista,
A beautiful vision for all to behold. Thanks for sharing.
Elise

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