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Open Poetry #14

Everytime you hold me

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-01 09:13 PM

At dawn when my love is heighten by your provocative hands,
that's when I feel my vulnerability to you.
My heart beats frantically,
when you search for me.
I cannot contain this passion.
You own my spirit,
everytime you hold me.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-07-01 10:37 PM

Now that's a sunrise...!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2001-07-01 11:48 PM

Short and passionate.....very descriptive. What a feeling it is to be held and feel that way!!!!!

Bridgette

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-07-02 01:23 AM

And I certainly hope that it is returned just as passionately and with as much feeling, nice write of true feelings...gentle smile

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-02 06:53 PM

as it should be. . .

well done. . .

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