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Open Poetry #14

Monday comes.....

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-07-02 04:09 PM

stale
dry
hard
and all sense
of joy
gone

limp

anticipation
behind a
door
of
white

discarded....

so

remove

all dreams

Trash is
picked up

Monday

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-02 04:12 PM

(clapping) Well done!! Nice minimalistic form... and clear images throughout.. this is a keeper!!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-07-02 04:14 PM

Wow, and I hated Monday's before reading this! Yikes!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-07-02 05:07 PM

Sadly eloquent.

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

4 posted 2001-07-02 05:30 PM

"it's just another manic monday"

and that's all i have to say about that.

"You gotta love livin 'cause dyin's a pain in the ass."
-Frank Sinatra

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2001-07-02 05:41 PM

Goodness...believe I would've stayed home...better yet, gone to the beach.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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