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Heart In Hand
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Heart In Hand |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Heart In Hand See the tears run free Hear my call echoing Love I have, always had To you my heart I gave The only heart I have It bleeds for comfort Always pushed away With heart in hand Scars all over Soul thirsty, calling What to do Where to go If I leave that heart And close my hand Would you care for it And all I'll ask Is to see your smiles Shine through your eyes Then I'll re-open my hand Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ This just emotes such deep feelings. Very tenderly portrayed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very lovely verse, Daniel. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely heartfelt plea, Daniel.  All writing comes |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Daniel, wow this was beautiful and yet bittersweet... "If I leave that heart And close my hand Would you care for it And all I'll ask Is to see your smiles Shine through your eyes Then I'll re-open my hand" awesome stanza...i really could FEEL this one. you have left me without many words, so i'll just say beautiful!! take care. amy "but i see your true colors, |
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