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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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HULCHUL COMMOTION Shaed issi ko muhabbat ho na khtay hain Waseem Perhaps, this is called love Waseem Ik hulchul si hey dil main muchi hoe There is a commotion inside the heart ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 07-03-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Perhaps it is... this is a simple straight forward piece which says so much with what is unsaid..I enjoyed.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes, so very much said in two wonderfully simple, honest, straightforward lines... well done, Waseem! |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
nice waseem ..you are getting closer |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Isn't that an ingredient of love ... commotion? Well done with a thriftiness of words. My kinda work  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Waseem~ I think you are very much right ! And very much wise ! I love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wasi~ this is so, so sweet...one of my favorites from you. I'll just slip this one into my library |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Waseem- how right you are.. this is wonderful..  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
I am really very thankful to you all for such nice comments and LOVE  |
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