| Open Poetry #14 |
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Lava Lamp Libido |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet
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~ Lava Lamp Libido ~ Like tongues in a passionate kiss, the two blobs meet - rubbing and sliding. The light goes out and the dance begins. Up and down, up and down. The heat surrounds them, and is them - forever until the energy is gone. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A way cool comparison, a very clever use of a theme! By the way - I love the title ![]() Take care, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-03-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Fantastic metaphorical use. My lava light is on ! ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing how the lava lamp has returned...didn't like it then...but now... with this, I must regroup....only you said it was turned off...before the kiss...so I am confused.... but that is not hard to do to me, now and then.... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Melissa ~ thank you oodles full!Marge ~ ohh no, what have I done? Hehe, you go girl ![]() Sunshine ~ hehe, I am sorry for the confusion...I didn't even realise there was a distinction to be made Actually I meant the light being turned off was the main light...you have to have all the rest of the lights off for the lava lamp to do its magic ![]() "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I have always wanted a lava lamp and now I want one even more lol. Really enjoyed this poem. "Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Brian ~ well they are lovely to watch |
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