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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-05-25 11:58 PM

can't see anything
but I feel cool fingers
brush across my brow
and softly feather on thighs
invisible caresses

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page
http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

1 posted 2001-05-26 01:54 AM

now i'm not gonna count syllables, because it's late and i'm lazy, but:

whispering soft
unseen touch
feather light feel
lover's gentle touch
soft silky-satiny skin

and i hope i've done it justice

-Napalm

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

2 posted 2001-05-26 01:59 AM

thanks

nice concept to add I appreciate your comment. I enjoy doing the tanka-haiku -choka- and oriental renka poetry.

[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 05-26-2001).]

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-05-26 04:18 AM

KoKo beautiful girl......oh my love this tanka.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

4 posted 2001-05-26 05:12 AM

Charisma, Thanks so much , my friend. Coming from you that is always a wonderful compliment to me. Your talent and grace is a joy to my heart when I visit your webpage.

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page
http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2001-05-26 06:43 AM

I enjoyed this image. I can almost feel the gentle breeze.
Melton

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-05-26 07:12 AM

I love those trade winds Koko...especially when they're blowing thru the palm fronds...James

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-05-28 02:33 AM

Koko-
Wonderful Tanka and image. Very nicely done.

Poeminister

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

8 posted 2001-05-28 08:28 AM

i just love this one so i am moving it to the top where it belongs KOKO

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