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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-05-31 02:35 AM

Sea Senryu

Serenity's waves
envelope my heart with peace
a calming aura

Swift in course the tides
employ themselves to this shore
answering karma

Sensual breezes
elevate me with thier fragrance-
ancient aroma

Seven heavens dress
every sense in shades of love
a light-umbra

Sea of dreams sprawls
evoked by one single stroke
a thought's scintilla

Shadows waltz waters
enchanted on the surface
alive by luna

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-01-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-31 02:38 AM

PM~ ya know I love this

so beautiful

the ocean is my heart's home

SEA

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-05-31 02:40 AM

These verses are all so well written but this one stuck in my mind...

               "Sea of dreams sprawls
                evoked by one one single stroke
                a thought's scintilla"

Just simply clever writing!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-05-31 02:53 AM

Now I see the acrostic.......wow!! You amaze me.....

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-05-31 02:55 AM

beautiful expression....love it.

Charisma

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-05-31 03:38 AM

Absolutely poetry of perfection!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

6 posted 2001-05-31 06:04 AM

What a great set. I do not think I have ever applied Acrostic to Haiku or Senryu.

Thus you have more than pleased, you have inspired.

Many thanks

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2001-05-31 07:13 AM

PM, that's some acrotic senryu you wrote there, enjoyed reading it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

8 posted 2001-06-06 07:26 AM

Love it Love it Love it

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

9 posted 2001-06-06 04:06 PM

Thank you all for your gracious comments...

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