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the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-06-22 02:16 PM

I checked it once I checked it twice
I wrote the first poem like three blind mice
I'm the first in this forum can't you see
the first poem was written by me.
Like doctor suess not in a house
or not with a mouse
but I was the first to write right here
but you will like it have no fear
The first in forum five
cause I, I will survive
so now that it's here second best
cause I was the first I beat all the rest

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say, I'm not asking you to hate me I just want you to relate don't forget about the message or the reason where on stage...dogwood

[This message has been edited by the_rescue (edited 06-22-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-22 02:28 PM

very cute!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-06-22 03:04 PM

Ha, so you're the first one eh

just don't forget to keep sharing

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

Love's Addiction
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

3 posted 2001-06-22 03:10 PM

this was a awesome poem, nice job.

if love wants me, then it can come find me
if music was a weapon, many ppl would be dead

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

4 posted 2001-06-22 03:22 PM

This is VERY cute.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-22 04:38 PM

Hahahaha LOL I really liked this one. VERY well done. You start off forum #5 in the best way possible, with fun.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

6 posted 2001-06-22 05:08 PM

haha this was cute i enjoyed it keep writing

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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7 posted 2001-06-22 05:10 PM

nice. i like to open with a humorous tone myself. here we go again!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

8 posted 2001-06-22 05:58 PM

yaaaay lol this is cute!! i have a question...can we still post in teen poetry #4 or r we supposed to post in this one now?? just curious. lol an amusing way to start #5 out with. nice work rescue. later
-fear-

"I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-06-22 06:20 PM

probably a bit longer in 4 but I recomend posting in here now that 5 is open!!

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

10 posted 2001-06-22 06:30 PM

Oh hooray! That was so cute!

Rhonda

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2001-06-22 06:36 PM

LOL...very cute!

enjoyed this one..

smiles,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

12 posted 2001-06-23 02:20 AM

hahaha...i liked this poem

...and arent you special

...enjoyed the read...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

13 posted 2001-06-23 03:02 AM

hahaha cuteness
katie

fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

14 posted 2001-06-23 11:18 AM

Good work, I enjoyed the read and you have the honour to be the first person to post here.

Zu

"Here we are again Finding ourselves at the end Of the wrong stick I guess it's far too late I'm building up the barricades In my head" -My Vitriol

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

15 posted 2001-06-23 01:44 PM

This is cute! I enjoyed this. Hehe.. keep posting all your work.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." –James T

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

16 posted 2001-06-23 01:46 PM

This is incredible. Best poem I've ever read.

I look forward to reading more... you just blew me away.

~Allan

DYME
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

17 posted 2001-06-23 02:55 PM

Cute and creative

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

18 posted 2001-06-23 05:17 PM

lol! Cute, simple and somewhat short...great job!

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

19 posted 2001-06-23 06:01 PM

congrats! I was... (hold on)...12th. well at least the 12th poem. go me!!!

Dr. Jo-Bizz
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since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

20 posted 2001-06-24 03:31 PM

*glares jealously*

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

21 posted 2001-06-25 09:28 PM

that is really cute, lol. really cute

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

22 posted 2001-07-05 01:24 AM

I know- I'm a lil late to reply...

Better late than never!
Cute stuff here Rescue.
Quite creative.

It put a smile on my face.

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

23 posted 2001-07-06 03:06 AM

heh this was cute

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