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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali 
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I was in the car with my mum the other day Wearing a blue shirt, with little duck buttons "Everything would be fine" I said "If people just shut up and looked at buttons" Buttons are very courious things They make you all warm and happy And when everything falls apart, A little butterfly can remind you that "Its all going to be fine" This is my poetry. I dont really follow any rules, but just rant, instead. Hope you like it! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh I like it very much! Welcome!  Please check your email for a special greeting!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME What a cute poem!! I love buttons too..especially cute lil duckies..i cant wait to read more!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Oh, this is a different kind of poem alright. But it doesn't lack in content. Who cares about following guidelines in writing poetry. I myself don't do it. Hope to see more of your work in the near future. Thanks for sharing and welcome again to Passions in Poetry hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Train of thought poetry is some of the most interesting work I've ever had the chance to read. Your's included. I really enjoyed it, and look forward to more. Ex Animo, Aaron |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 Welcome to Passions!! Who cares about following a certain path for writing? bah to that!  This is different to what we usually see and it'll be good to mix it up a bit. Thanks for sharing this and I hope you reply as well as post. ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Nice poem Welcome to Passion, im sure you'll like it here, im new and i know i do.. hehe.Who cares when it comes to rules and poetry? Poetry is a window to the heart, the mind, and the soul. The best kind of poetry is the kind that follows no rules, because that shows the true thought. I dunno if i follow rules or not, i just kind of write and rhyme Once again, good poem Hope to see more-Nathan |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Nice poem. Welcome to passions! (Rules are overrated "sometimes" ) Keep it up.Jenn "You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it." [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-30-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to passions. I found this poem intrigueing. very profound.......i'd like to know what the buttons stand for and so on. Very well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
I REALLY enjoyed this! A little different than the norm.. that's a good thing I hope you keep posting, I'll be looking for more from you! btw, Welcome to Passions! Sarah *the chains which once held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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