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Teen Poetry #5

Begged to Differ

aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

0 posted 2001-09-28 02:21 AM

They say the grass is green
and the sky is blue
that only birds can fly
and old is worse then new
But I beg to differ

They say Summer is Fun
and 2 plus 2 is four
that rivers have banks
and the ocean; a shore
But I beg to differ

They say that I'm all wrong
that I'm not thinking straight
that I should be certified
and left to my fate
But I beg to differ

I say I see things true
outside the normal range
looking beyond borders
and now am labeled strange
Because I Begged to Differ.

Ex Animo,
Aaron

[This message has been edited by aaron woodside (edited 09-28-2001).]

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
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1 posted 2001-09-28 11:37 AM

Wow...jeez i dont even know what to say..i think im speechless for once! That never happens..oy...what an amazing piece!! I really enjoyed it..you've got some amazing talent!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
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2 posted 2001-09-28 11:54 AM

Jeez...begging to differ always gets you in trouble. This came across as a really strong piece to me. You dared to defy the odds and for that you were labelled but you stil did it.
Great write. I look forward to many more. Remember to reply as well as post.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

3 posted 2001-09-28 05:51 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!!!

hehe i just noticed that your kina new to PIP..So WELCOME!!!!!

I really liked this, it was really nice Aaron..keep posting i hope to see lots more!

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