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How I Never Learn
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How I Never Learn |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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How I Never Learn Salt fills each vein I hate to see you see you in the rain I don't want you to have any pain wherever you know (it's gone now) just (happy singing)memories sick of being abused you choosed U losed I am not there faces we wanna burn face it I never learn to say the "right" I make the same mistakes over and over and over again what is my? comeback? "baby, how ya been." a simple staircase turn of which I will never learn To wear your shoes. ---------------------- Sorry if I've been a little absent. Been trying to drop in, but school is  "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
You have one of the most kick ass writing styles I have ever seen before in my life! This piece is fabulous. "you choosed U losed I am not there faces we wanna burn face it I never learn to say the "right"" I really enjoyed those lines because well hell, I feel exactly the same way. Thanks for the read.  ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
All your poems are so awsome yu have a talent for writting poetry.Keep up the great work. Lauren |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
SEAN!  This is incredible! I envy your talent...the format, the meaning...I especially liked the last two stanzas:I make the same mistakes over and over and over again what is my? comeback? "baby, how ya been." a simple staircase turn of which I will never learn To wear your shoes. I have nothing else to say but.. You are definately one of the best poets here at pip...no joking. »Leah« Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
hey there...i haven't been here in awhile either, but glad i came back to read this one. never cease to amaze me! me |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I feel ya with the whole school thing hun..i agree!! Its nice to see a post from you though I enjoyed this and i liked the format of it...nice job!! |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
WOW! Incredible writing here, Sean...I loved it...Awesome style as well. Into the library it goes...*Kisses your feet* LMAO Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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