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crazymary Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 14nebraska |
You look so peaceful lying there lost in dreams without a care I long to kiss that soft red mouth and stroke your tousled hair whisper to your sleeping heart and ask if I am there Your skin looks soft and so enticing just waiting for my touch I can feel the warmth I long for my body aches for yours so much I could wake you gently and revel in your smile or lay my head beside yours and hear you dreaming for awhile |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
How dreamy and romantic  ::sighs:: |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. I liked this....*sigh* hehe "You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it." |
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crazymary Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 14nebraska |
xShUgArHiGhx & Jenn Cirrincione, thanks for your replies! i would really like to hear more comments on the poem bc i am considering giving this to the person i wrote it about. please let me know what you think! thanks |
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