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Holding My Breath
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Holding My Breath |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I catch your gaze as you glance at me across the table in the cafe where we're drinking tea with friends. It seems that everytime I glance up you're looking over at me with your blue eyes giving me chills. Your eyes capture me until I find myself holding my breath. I rest my head lightly on your shoulder and you take me hand whispering something sweetly in my ear. It seems that everytime I'm with you I loose my mind as you look at me with your blue eyes. Your eyes capture me until I find myself holding my breath. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I liked the format and the flow of it. I think you did a great job on this poem. Isnt it such a great feeling?? Thanks for sharing! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is the complete oppostie of the other poem of yours that I just read. Seems like someone is really happy in this one  thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
tender moments succinctly captured..thank you for sharing..  |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Wow, this is truly romantic! But don't hold your breath too long! You may turn blue  then you won't know which is bluer... His eyes, or your face...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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