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The simpleness of night
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The simpleness of night |
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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
During the simpleness of night I bore between feelings, Strange feelings I rarely understand, Feelings that attract me and drown me, Feelings of loss. Then I think of you, And I find myself between another feeling, A red and joyful feeling, A feeling that attracts me and loves me, A feeling never forgotten. A pleasure full of heat, I feel when I think of you, That opens my soul and makes me happy, That relaxes my mind, Calms me and brings me joy. I shall not hide my love for you, For it is a feeling that changes my life, Hides me in your innocence, Brings me pleasure and makes me happy. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
A pleasure full of heat, loved that line danny...can tell youre in love ...sweet..  ...good poem!
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
aaww, that's so sweet and well-written! It takes more work to love myself than to love others... I guess that explains it, eh? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
amazing the things love can do eh?? great job...i enjoyed this piece!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Let me gues Daniel, Marilyn? lol nice poem, keep it up -C.M. |
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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
Of course Carlos!!! |
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