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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
I was surching through all my poems and found some older ones i had written, so i decided i would share... Titled: I loved you I loved you, You loved me back, Untill the day you, knocked me off my back, My life was dead, My home was gone, Yet what do i do, Think of you all day long, I grab a rose, Turn around, One quick sigh, It's dropped on the ground, Lovers of day, Lovers of night, You no longer speak with me, So i say, Goodnight. -Dreys |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the somewhat, want of a lasting memory...lonlinness esp the last verse... saying goodnight all alone...i liked the shown yet sort of hidden emotions in this poem...nice. =) |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
My home was gone ...*knows how that must feel like* ...thanks for sharing this nathan...you got your emotions across very well.  |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Things really can all be over in the blink of an eye huh...sad really...im sorry this happened...::hugs:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
short yet sweet from me as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Nathan, I am sorry you are hurting. I know someday you will find your true love and be very happy. Dawn |
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