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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Life quietly rains into your sun home to teach you the difference. "A laughing jolly man plots your demise." - my fotune cookie |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
...food for thought!....so tell me jaime, are violet sunglasses better then rose coloured ones?. for a short poem i liked this a lot. lifes not always fun and games- it too has the quality of dampening the sunhine. thanks for sharing  |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oooh.. I get a reply AND a kiss? Be careful, the others may get jealous.  Just kidding of course.Personally, I like all sunglasses. Seriously. I have a vast collection. I have a blue pair, leopard rim, cateyes, a purple pair, an orange pair, etc. etc. etc. I also have a green pair that are really big... they look like bug eyes. For anybody that has ever been in Hot Topic you know which ones I'm talking about.  And yes, I do wear them in public.As for the poem... thank you.  I know it's short, but sometimes people cloud the real message with too many words. Things don't always need to be so complex, you know?I actually wrote this in Mrs. Duff's science room on the board with those magnets with words on them. "A laughing jolly man plots your demise." - my fotune cookie I think Santa is plottin' on me. jaimespoetry.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this is a very cool piece. i was short but you could talke this a lot of different ways. great job on this Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
HeHe, I love that Rose colored sunglasses saying. I like this poem too, its good in its simplicity. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh how wonderful! This can be taken onto so many different levels! Thanks for sharing this wonderful, but short piece. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
in its simplicity; quite thought-provoking...really liked the format in which it was written. fully enjoyed, Jamie. Hey...#25437 What! You in there? Yea, im in here. ok [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 12-08-2001).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very interesting point of view excellent write keep it up là où est mon amour? |
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