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AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 45

0 posted 2001-12-13 08:23 PM

I sit and watch
your every move.
The way you walk,
the way you talk
I just love the things you do.
Your smile, your laugh
I just can't get you
off my mind.
I think about you
all the time.
24/7 365 Oh! how my
body melts when you look
me in the eyes.
I just can't describe
the feeling i get
when im around you
it's like a natural high.
I wish I could explain
to you all my reason's why?
When you ask why i'm so
uptight, or why i always
look away, but you see
when im around you i just
can't find the word to say...

~~~Please tell me what your think~~~

[This message has been edited by AllThatGlitters4321 (edited 12-13-2001).]

krystlebabe19
Junior Member

since 2001-11-09

Posts 27

1 posted 2001-12-13 10:17 PM

I really liked your poem it was really sweet, I can def. relate ,im going threw the same kinda issue right now with a certain someone. I hope it turns out for the best!!!! Im sure it will! Love your work

If you ever need some one to talk 2 im always hear
~Krystle~

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-12-14 01:08 AM

I love how this is written! It reads like a rap sort of.

Feeling this strongly for a person is a good thing. You should consider yourself lucky.

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

Caution: Filling is hot.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-12-14 09:13 PM

i agree with af...this does have a lyrical feel to it. i like it

i guess everyone whos ever had a crush can relate to this..thanks for sharing..

....but wanting a gold one

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-12-15 01:50 PM

oo i liked this. i havent someone that im this way around. drives you nuts huh? oh well, guess everything happens for a reason and you cant control the way you feel neways ..sucks

But neways, great job!

**dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Moonlight Angel
New Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 7

5 posted 2001-12-15 07:07 PM

I really like this. And i can relate, i am going through that right now. sucks really... he doesn't know me.

thIs Is hOw yOU rEmInd mE
Of whAt I rEAlly Am...

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2001-12-17 10:22 AM

Wooohooo I understand this, I think that at one point or another everyone is able to. Nice job.

Ain't love grand?

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

7 posted 2001-12-17 09:29 PM

Wow..you must reallyl like whoever your wrote this poem for it's full of emotions I liked it.Keep up the great work.
lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

8 posted 2001-12-17 09:56 PM

isn't love great? this poem is full of raw, "lovin" emotion- i luv it! keep writing!
-Joe

crazymin83
Junior Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 49
Mass

9 posted 2001-12-18 12:15 PM

hey thats how I felt about my boyfriend before he asked me out. I couldn't sleep at night, then when he'd put his arms around me I felt something that I couldn't explain to him. Come check out some of poetry sometime

Min

AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 45

10 posted 2001-12-18 09:10 AM

Thank you all for your reply's....I will be sure to keep writing

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