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Teen Poetry #5

Your eyes in mine

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-12-20 10:14 PM

Pink and green swirled.
But then, isnt it blue?
Or maybe yellow?
I see your eyes in mine
Everytime I look at a
Bubble

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2001-12-21 06:18 AM

I liked this immensely, it's very creative and can't really be pidgeon holed, hope to read more of your work soon.

Zu

"No army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-12-21 11:29 AM

I just can't figure what the bubble symbolizes
I feel it's something special, but I need help
pls explain

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

3 posted 2001-12-21 06:28 PM

A bubble is the most celestial thing you'll find on this corrupt world- it symbolizes hope, beuaty, and perfection.

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