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LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

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IL

0 posted 2001-06-24 07:19 PM

“The Path Of Love”

Journy of a lifetime
From birth till death
A game of the senses played
Upon the cords of our hearts

Perplexed
In a riddle

Amazed
In a daze

Searching
In a quest

Love
In a tenderness

Winning
In a triumph

Losing
In a fall

Emptiness
In a void

Pain
In a heartache

Lonely
In a separation

Death
In the end

It has come and gone
This thing known as love
It makes us in the beginging
But it will break us in the end

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-06-24 07:31 PM

very good!

I like this one a lot

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-06-24 08:04 PM

Yay! Another good one from you!
Rhonda

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

3 posted 2001-06-24 08:10 PM

There are sometimes when that it too true.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-06-24 08:57 PM

"This thing known as love
It makes us in the beginging
But it will break us in the end"

I cannot express how true this really is. I'm convinced now that love only ends in heartache. Nice job. I really enjoyed this.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-06-24 09:57 PM

I loved the format on this one!
Great post.
Wonderful read!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-06-25 12:12 PM

Lone Wolf-
wow! this is a powerful write!!
i really like this!

smiles,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

anonymous albert ?

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Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-06-25 12:18 PM

powerful yet full of truth...i liked this one aLOT...great job!...enjoyed greatly

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

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land of cheese (Wisconsin)

8 posted 2001-06-25 05:02 AM

i agree with marie...that stanza was awesome. great work lone wolf.
-fear-

"I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL

Marshalzu

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Lurking

9 posted 2001-06-25 09:04 AM

Great work Lonewolf this was awesome and I thourghily enjoyed the read

Andrew

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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10 posted 2001-06-25 10:32 AM

i told you again

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
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11 posted 2001-06-25 10:38 AM

LOL, yah i guess you did.
And thank you all for your replies

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Acies

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since 2000-06-07

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Twilight Zone

12 posted 2001-06-25 07:33 PM

I don't believe that Love is what breaks us in the end. It's mostly the other person's lies and disrespec that causes it. Be strong my friend. Keep your chin up

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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

13 posted 2001-06-25 10:17 PM

this is great...really great! thanks for sharin!!!!!!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

14 posted 2001-06-25 10:33 PM

I liked the way you did the middle of the poem...with just two lines. I found it effective.

This is extremely well written! Keep it up!

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

15 posted 2001-06-26 07:32 PM

Thank you for your replies

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

16 posted 2001-06-26 11:54 PM

I really love how you wrote this poem. Very powerful! I thought this was pretty darn good, in fact. Impressed the heck out of me.
VERY nice.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

17 posted 2001-07-03 02:17 AM

"This thing known as love
It makes us in the beginging
But it will break us in the end"

i loved that part. but i agree with acire. i know it can hurt, but it heals.
*hugs all*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

18 posted 2001-07-04 05:44 PM

awesome! the format was unique, i dig that. its great to read poems that dont have the "norm" format. keep posting

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

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