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Teen Poetry #5

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Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-01-08 01:08 AM

He means everything to me,
his heart belongs to her.

There is a hole in my heart . . .
now filled with envy.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-01-08 12:43 PM

Beautifully written Jamie...short and sweet

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2002-01-09 09:57 AM

very well done. see? a poem doesnt necissarily have to ba a novel to be totally awsome and express ur feelings! i loved it. short simple and to the point!
~britt~

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