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Teen Poetry #5

sattilite senses

pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2002-01-23 02:57 AM

  sattilite senses
     pick up mixed signals
as the Magnolia Air
            surrounds me
  sweet tea breath
     mingled with a
fast-slow drawl
            leads me home again
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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2002-01-26 12:34 PM

Hmm I like you use of free verse, this is a really good poem and I enjoyed the read

Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-26 12:50 PM

this was interesting and im not usually a fan of free verse but i happened to like this one a lot..thanks for sharing

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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