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Lost in you
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Lost in you |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Today I got lost in your eyes You looked at me And I dived into them those pools of dark brown Today I got lost in your smile you looked at me and my insides brightened My heart rose in my throat Today I got lost in you arms You looked at me and I felt myself near you and I longed for you so Today I got lost in my heart you looked at me And I took you and stored you away Today I got lost in you |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
How beautiful is this? This sounds like one time where being lost wouldn't be so bad  Great work  *for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time* Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle [This message has been edited by Jenabou (01-31-2002 07:18 PM).] |
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LCsftball16 Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 39 |
awwh this poem was soo sweet! it makes me want to go out n fall in love with some guy! lol..something like that! nice write can't wait to read more! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very sweet I enjoyed this.. I hope to see more soon. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this was so cute!!! Great read hun Thanks for sharing!BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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