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Teen Poetry #5

Love's gravity

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-02-23 02:15 PM

I never know
What words to use anymore
Never know when
To shut that door
Once the wind comes rushing in
I never know
When I should call out your name
When I'm fed up
Tired of playing destiny's game
I cry
That's something I'll never deny
And I dream
Of looking deep within your eyes
I don't know how much longer
I can deny
That I'm being pulled down
By love's gravity....

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-23 04:12 PM

wow...excellent poem....I love the last line....I am always stuck in loves gravity

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2002-02-24 02:05 PM

I love this!
I know exactly what you mean..
Love's gravity.. another
force of nature that you have
no control over..
Great Work!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2002-02-26 05:08 PM

Oh oh oh oh oh oh!!!

I love it! Another fantastically done poem, my friend.

Loved these lines especially:

I don't know how much longer
I can deny
That I'm being pulled down
By love's gravity....

Wow. I love it.

Sincerely,
Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2002-02-28 04:45 AM

were you intending this to be a song? cuz i can really see this being sung out as one

...great read

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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