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Jenn Cirrincione

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0 posted 2002-04-07 12:02 PM

Licking your lips
Reaching for my hand
Missing me as I walk away-
I can feel you watching.

Your charm can drop 'em like flies
Over and over
One by one
to their knees.

So you believe,
you got me too.
Just another notch-
in that tacky belt?

Your eyes do travel-
that is certain
Down,down..down..
and to the floor.

So I smile sweetly,
and come up close.
And coyly whisper-
you wish

anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2002-04-07 12:23 PM

Oh booya! LOL!

Loved it, Jenn. Ahh I could totally see that happening. Very cool indeed.

Keep 'em coming, chicka.

~AF~

"Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29

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2 posted 2002-04-07 07:21 PM

Hahahahahahahahahahaha, I love it...I can jsut picture you doing...I can picture myself doing it too....great write

~Lisa

CwboyAtHeart
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3 posted 2002-04-07 07:26 PM

Ouch... lol That would suck... lol Anywho, nice write, it was funny and well written.

Jenn Cirrincione

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4 posted 2002-04-08 08:05 AM

Thanks guys. hehe

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

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...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-04-08 12:29 PM

"So I smile sweetly,
and come up close.
And coyly whisper-
you wish"

KNARF!

Splendid job.

~ Titus

"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2002-04-08 02:00 PM

Hehehe you go girl!! WHat a cute poem!!! I really liked this

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

quietlydying

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the wonderful land of oz

7 posted 2002-04-10 03:09 PM

'Just another notch-
in that tacky belt?'

oooh...

i love that line.

::grins::

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

Jenn Cirrincione

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8 posted 2002-04-10 06:15 PM

Thanks everyone...

Ya'all are so good to me.

I really needed to get this out..thanks Vicki for the inspiration.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2002-04-10 11:25 PM

Jenn-
This is great! I love it.
Glad you were able to get this one out,
and you did it with a touch of humor.
Gotta love that.
Thanks for the smile and the laugh.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

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swimming in fairy floss...........

10 posted 2002-04-11 01:00 AM

hehehhe..you tell em girl!

much enjoyed

The feeling of Sleepiness when you're not in bed, and can't get there, is the meanest feeling in the world.-- Edgar Waston Howe

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