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Teen Poetry #5

New game plan

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2002-05-05 10:00 PM

Misplace are my thoughts
And dreams
From childhood I was force
I came to the top
Only to fell down
On god’s door stop,

You see I never dream of failure
For it made no sense,
I could achieve what I want
Why did I let that in my head?

I am never the best,
As I compete with the rest,
I take it all in and try to relive
Catch up on the stuff that you know
But I can’t do this ****
Anymore,

The pain is not the problem
It’s the struggle I feel,
No finish line in this race-
I have to keep up
Case by case

Through the choices I make
I create my life
And the path travel
Only struggles seem to
Unravel
But I am gonna keep on going
New game plan is all I need…

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (05-06-2002 12:28 AM).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-05-06 01:36 PM

its good to see that you have a positive outlook on all of this. i wish you the best of luck in finding a new plan..im shur you can do it

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

songsoftheaftermath
Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 84
a world of disarray

2 posted 2002-06-27 02:01 AM

"Through the choices I make
I create my life
And the path travel
Only struggles seem to
Unravel
But I am gonna keep on going
New game plan is all I need…"

i like your resolve at the end there. it makes sense to go on and create a new game plan when things arent going the way you want them to. thanks for sharing

could the darkness be my friend?

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2002-06-28 10:42 AM

Thanks for reading my poem an replying to it.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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