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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I only speak in verses Eternal curses No dealin with the ordinary Alone-don’t want to marry Life a whirlpool Hated school While dated all the fools Left life for knowledge All dreams burned foliage Can’t settle down Just cause I am brown Don’t mindI sound keyed up as a gee free from rules loving passion and joy ridin chalked up once twice by fifteen and leavin this thug life- full of strife… Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Interesting piece..different from what im use to from you but a nice change. iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
This Is very good i think the words tie together great. (I know you really dont care what a newbie like me has to say but ill tell you what i think anyways) Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î |
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