| Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Found You |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Title: I Found You I found you Hiding under my Bed. I found you Waiting to hold My hand. I found you Talking sweet things Behind my Back. I found you wanting to embrace Me in your arms. I found ou with a smile that Lights up the sky. I found you leaving a smiple Rose on my pillow. I found you Kissing me here Tonight. I found you Needing me in your Life. I found you To care when Nobody else would. I found you Letting me rest on your Shoulder. I found you Giving me guidence When things went bad. I found you An note you wrote that told me to Smile. I found you Been the brightest Star in my sky. I found you The one person who Loved all along. By: *~Ang~* ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was simple and beautifully written. Very well done Liked it a lot...thanks for sharing!Sometimes I get so weird |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Simple, short, and very sweet. Looking forward to more.Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Xaphan Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 22 |
Awwww Oh so cute and sweet. Reminds me so much of how I felt when I was with my first love. It's also simple, which is a good thing. Sometimes I, and probably lots of other people, make a habit of making things more complicated than they have to be. Sometimes you can say more with short sentences than you ever could with fifty 5-line paragraphs ![]() |
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