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Teen Poetry #5

Judge myself by you

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-07-11 01:01 PM

Judge myself by your perfection
Covers of a magazine
Obsession with a fake reflection
Amplified on TV screens
Judge myself by your own grades
Letters on indifferent papers
Slicing through like torturous blades
Slowly my ambition tapers

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2002-07-11 02:46 PM

nice poem. Good use of words.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

2 posted 2002-07-11 04:08 PM

Hey I really liked this one..it's awesome. Good job!

"I shot the pilot. I'm begging you to fly this for me. I'm here for you to use, broken and bruised. Do you understand?"-Brand New

almost366
New Member

since 2002-07-11

Posts 3
DC, land of the good times

3 posted 2002-07-11 08:27 PM

I like this a lot. I like the message and the rhythm you've got going on. Nicely done.

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