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Teen Poetry #5

Nightly Visits From Confusion

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-08-14 03:02 PM

Hmm..I'm not sure about that title. I really hate thinking of titles..Unless I have something really good for a title. Anyway, here's just something I wrote a few minutes ago. It needs work but..eh.

This feeling is new to me,
A yearning for something unknown,
It gets worse at night.
I lay restlessly entwined in my solitary bed sheets,
Praying to a God,
That I'm not even sure exists,
Begging for this pain in my chest to be taken away,
I'm looking for a miracle,
Just something to let me know,
That I'm doing the right thing,
Becase, right now, I know what direction I'm pointed in,
But not where I'm going.

*~erin~*

"You say the present's just a pleasant interruption to the past."-Something Corporate

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2002-08-14 03:44 PM

i think the title would be better if you just called it confusion that suits it better. but anyways i liked it really good.
robin

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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