"RAGE AGAINST LETTING GO" repost

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"RAGE AGAINST LETTING GO" repost

anawnda
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since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

0 posted 2002-08-15 05:40 AM

"RAGE AGAINST LETTING GO"

A scab...
is slowly forming...
covering the cut I got
from loving you.

A fool,
I've been
& will always be
to keep picking
on the scab,
refusing to let go.

***

Otaku
Junior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 39
Western Australia

1 posted 2002-08-15 06:49 AM

i strongly agree with the intent of your poem..

nice comparison with scabs...something we can all relate to..

good job!

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2002-08-15 01:39 PM

This was quite powerful.
Not to be "cliche" but I relate.

Jenn

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